Tuesday, April 16, 2013

I See You


I see your eyes
I feel your pain
All you do remains in vain
I see your struggle
I see your fight
Even when all you get is spite
I see your smile
I feel your fear
We all know you hide the tears
I see your anger
I feel your rage
As blood rains down on the stage
You want to scream
You want to shout
But your voice is always blocked out
Yet you don't fall
You never give
In the end you choose to live
I take your hand
You close your eyes
I pull you up and help you rise
You're not alone
You'll never be
I'm forever yours
You can trust me
 
(c)Tori P. Coelho 4/16/13
This is a poem I wrote last night while thinking about a friend of mine. He's such a hard worker, yet things never seem to work out for him. The photo is of my own eyes.

3 comments:

  1. This is beautiful. your eyes are gorgeous

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  2. I love this. Your eyes are piercing. Very mysterious and almost ghostly in a way

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